email@example.com. I'll take the first five that I think would make for good posts.
I'll publish your submission and my comments on the blog this week and our readers will be able to comment as well.
For more information on our submission process, go here.
I don't claim to be an expert, but I'm a published author (or will be on 3/2/13) and work for the marketing department of Curiosity Quills Press. Here are some of my past posts on querying and first pages so you can know in advance what I might comment on.
The Query Formula
Frightening First Page Fouls
I look forward to reading!