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Thursday, January 31, 2013

Hook #11

There is one mirror in my house. It is behind a sliding panel in the hallway upstairs. Our faction allows me to stand in front of it on the second day of every third month, the day my mother cuts my hair.

YAY, someone guessed. Divergent by Veronica Roth


Tyrean Martinson said...

Divergent! Sorry, I know this probably isn't a challenge to recognize the hook, but it just popped into my head.

I think the word "faction" and the "one mirror" are the parts that make this hook work.

Huntress said...