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Friday, February 1, 2013

Hooks - #18

You know me, then? I thought so. It is rare for travelers to journey to the high lands at the start of winter.

2 comments:

LD Masterson said...

To many prepositional phrases stung together. And missing punctuation.

Huntress said...

Excellent fantasy novel by an established author. Sorry about the missing punctuation. My bad.