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Friday, February 1, 2013

Hooks, #16

I’ve been in love with Sandra Baker since the second day of the sixth grade. That’s when I stopped thinking girls had cooties and started noticing they had breasts. Nothing much has changed since then. 


Huntress said...

I'd cut 'started noticing' and substitute 'noticed' but other than that, HOOKED!

mshatch said...

I agree, I like this line a lot!