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Friday, February 1, 2013
Hooks, #16
I’ve been in love with Sandra Baker since the second day of the sixth
grade. That’s when I stopped thinking girls had cooties and started noticing
they had breasts. Nothing much has changed since then.
2 comments:
I'd cut 'started noticing' and substitute 'noticed' but other than that, HOOKED!
I agree, I like this line a lot!
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