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Friday, February 1, 2013

Hooks - #18

You know me, then? I thought so. It is rare for travelers to journey to the high lands at the start of winter.


LD Masterson said...

To many prepositional phrases stung together. And missing punctuation.

Huntress said...

Excellent fantasy novel by an established author. Sorry about the missing punctuation. My bad.