First Sentence Hooks

What are you doing here? If you live in the US you should be at the pool or lake or having a good time somewhere.

For those of you outside the US, thanks for being patient while we play.

Tomorrow we'll discuss hooking your reader. Right now I want to open up for submissions of the first sentence of your WIP. Let's see them standing all alone and see if they hook us. Send your first lines to charity.bradford@gmail.com. Please put Unicorn Bell: First Sentence in the subject line and format the entry as follows.

Title:
Genre:
First sentence:

If you have multiple stories, you can send as many first lines as you want in the same email.