The Triple Whammy Crit Returns

Hey all! Misha here.

Once again, I'm critiquing queries, first chapters and/or synopses this week. As before, this will work on a first come, first serve basis.

You're welcome to only send one or two of the three, or you can send all three and specify if you don't want something posted. I prefer the latter, because I find it's easier to spot a problem if I can see a bigger picture. If you send all three, I'll crit all three and post (or post about) whichever I deem useful or interesting in some way (unless you specify differently, of course).

Interested? Please mail me at unicornbellsubmissions(at)gmail(dot)com and put "Misha" in the subject line so I know it's meant for me. Just one thing: I don't do erotica. I realize that it's a legit genre and don't throw any aspersions on it, but it's simply not something I read. Everything else is fine.

*Rubs hands* Can't wait to see if anything's sent in...