Hi All! Sorry for the delay in posting! Yesterday was a rough one. But, without further ado, I give you a query for analysis. (And please ...

Original – Apolline is happy hunting magical creatures on her pirate infested outer-perimeter planet. She is a fantastic shot, and does...

Original - Seventeen-year-old Jesse thought getting beaten and branded out of gang life was the worst thing imaginable. He was wrong. ...

Yay! Seems someone thought I make sense when I'm critting queries. Such a relief, really. This lady wants to publish the story under a...

I'm so glad this came in as my first query to crit, because I've found that this is a mistake most people make with queries. In fact...

Original -  Tara Stevens is a smart, successful lawyer with a pocketful of humor and a mouth full of sass. But when she finds her husband ...

Original format -  First, do no harm . It’s an oath Blake Ryan took to become a doctor. Ironic, given that he spent most of his thousand...

Original format: As you are looking to add to your inventory for Castle Gate Press, I believe I have a novel that may interest you, especia...