Thursday, July 25, 2013

It Be Another Day of Yay or Nay



I didn't receive any subs for critique. What? Are you scared? Can't take it? Worried that someone might tear your precious words piece by piece, phrase by phrase, noun from verb?

Yeah. Me too.

Here's another one:
His face changed from slack interest to wide-eyed panic as a varmint reacts to the shadow of an overhead hawk.

*sigh* Beat it now. Mutilate. Stomp it. Grind it into the dirt. Killkillkillkill...

And tomorrow, if I don't receive any submissions, you get to see my book cover reveal. 
Bwhahahahahaha


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7 comments:

  1. David OliverJuly 25, 2013 at 7:00 AM

    I want to make one small change in yours:

    His face changed from slack interest to wide-eyed panic as a bunny reacts to the shadow of an overhead hawk.

    And here is mine:

    Suddenly the word took on a terror he had never attached to word. The dentist said, "I'm going to have to drill."

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  2. David OliverJuly 25, 2013 at 7:02 AM

    ugh! Suddenly it took on a terror..

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  3. HuntressJuly 25, 2013 at 7:04 AM

    FOTFLMAO

    oh, you are bad. soooooooo baaaaaaddd

    *still laughing*

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  4. David OliverJuly 25, 2013 at 7:47 AM

    thanks :)

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  5. Angela BrownJuly 25, 2013 at 8:30 AM

    I'm a little behind from just getting back from vacay so trying to see what's the haps?

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  6. Crystal CollierJuly 25, 2013 at 11:51 AM

    Ooh! Book cover reveal? Now you got my attention. =D

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  7. PatchiJuly 25, 2013 at 12:10 PM

    I like this one.

    And now I can't give you a sentence because I want to see the cover. Maybe you should have word it: "If I don't receive any submissions, you [won't] see my book cover reveal."

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