Friday, February 1, 2013

Hooks - #18

You know me, then? I thought so. It is rare for travelers to journey to the high lands at the start of winter.
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2 comments:

  1. LD MastersonFebruary 1, 2013 at 12:37 PM

    To many prepositional phrases stung together. And missing punctuation.

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  2. HuntressFebruary 1, 2013 at 1:29 PM

    Excellent fantasy novel by an established author. Sorry about the missing punctuation. My bad.

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