Thank you to everyone who submitted their first page and/or query! I have enough for this week, but you can still submit using our standard ...

Thank you Patricia, my first brave volunteer! Here is her query for a science fiction romance. --- Dear [Agent Name], David and Catrine, top...

This week I'd love to provide feedback on queries and first pages! It will be first-come first-served, any genre. So if you're gam...

This week I’m offering “what if” questions for you to ponder. Because I’m lazy that way it’s a holiday week. Full explanation on Monday’s ...

This week I’m offering “what if” questions for you to ponder. Because I’m lazy that way it’s a holiday week. Full explanation on Monday’s ...

This week I’m offering “what if” questions for you to ponder. Because I’m lazy that way it’s a holiday week. Full explanation on Monday’s ...

This week I’m offering “what if” questions for you to ponder. Because I’m lazy that way it’s a holiday week. Full explanation on Monday’s ...

It’s a thing I do on my personal blog. It all started because I needed a topic for Thursdays I tend to get these random thoughts that then ...

Well Don e on the first submission ! YAY! And now we have a second submission! Even better.  So again. I'll be doing my impressions. ...

You have all been spared the scaryness of reading any of my desperate attempts at squishing words together to form this poetry stuff! We hav...

...It is Christmas time, a halting of hate time. On this platform of peace, we can create a language to translate ourselves to ourselves ...

Wow....HA!  That title came off a bit more rude then I meant it to be! What I MEANT was 'Tis the Season...and am totally not going to ...

The writer says:  Just some back story, MC has been sent to a new foster home after some trouble and is fleeing an abusive boyfriend, Luke. ...

The writer says:  It's from a WIP called THE WORD, a YA paranormal romance (?) set in the Regency era. 1) Does the modern-sounding voice...

The writer says:  Here is the opening of my novel, The Legacy of the Eye . I would like to know if the start feels too slow and if I still h...

The writer says:  I need to know if the world building is strong enough, and whether you’d read on. Any other critiques would be helpful.  T...

A writer bravely throws this scene under my red pen: A man’s hand reached out from the smoky-plated mirror and caressed River’s cheek. The...