It's not too late to send in your first page to be entered in the contest. The novel itself does not have to be finished. Send your ent...

I've got one last critique for you all this week, a first page from an NA/YA Fantasy:   CHAPTER 1 Sophie I sneak out of my ...

The lights went out at the same time Katrina’s phone vibrated on her desk. She grabbed it with shaky fingers, saw her mom’s picture ...

If only he could throw a bar of lava or Fire. Even a jet of Water would do in a pinch. But he couldn’t do that. Not without certain r...

Well, it's finally Spring (or so the calender says) and I'm back with first page critiques for the week. If you're intereste...

Submission Number 2. comes from our own Charity Bradford. Here's the first page of her YA Contemporary Scifi, FADE INTO ME. ...

  As promised, today we have the first page of Scott Abel's THE FOLLOWING, a YA paranormal romance/suspense novel. My comments w...

 Me again, offering first page (or what have you) critiques for anyone who wants to polish a page or two. I will do my best to tell you what...

Come writers and critics Who prophesize with your pen. And keep your eyes wide The chance won’t come again. And don’t speak too soon For the...

Interested? It's my week here at Unicorn Bell and I'd love to crit your first page. It could be something you've just started or...

Our final crit of the week comes from Huntress' Urban Fantasy, Of Oak and Dragons. She wants to know if this first page draws the re...

You have all been saved by Lauren from my review of Skyfall (which wasn't going to be favorable). Here is her first page of MIRROR M...

Today we have one of our very own contributors offering up her first page. This is a sequel and she wants to know whether it pulls the r...

Today we have Rachel’s first page (yay!!!), an MG fairy tale retelling of Hansel and Gretel . My comments will be in purple and do plea...

Fortunately you are all spared my review of Skyfall – for now. Patricia has graciously allowed me to crit the first page of her current...

To save them. The Enclosure stood alone as if the other buildings were afraid of catching its disease. Hell, I was afraid of catch...

Last time I asked for your first pages and this was one I didn't have time to crit but promised to post next. However, I'm goi...

Thank you Patricia for taking the time to revise your first page. Here are my comments      "Cat, we are stepping into our future ...

 A big thank you to Samantha for submitting the first page of her Middle Grade Fantasy, The Lost Figurehead . My comments will be in purp...

 A big thank you to Alrea for submitting the first page of her, Dragon . My comments will be in purple. I invite you to add yours and help A...