tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post9194165503017241116..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Critting OUT OF TOUCH: needs character workHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-36760052948325418742013-10-15T11:15:40.804-05:002013-10-15T11:15:40.804-05:00Thank you for your insights. I reworked both scen...Thank you for your insights. I reworked both scenes. I don't know if you will have time to re-crit anything, but I resubmitted the Prologue and the first scene. Of course, now that I have done that, I am beginning to wonder if The Prologue should be dropped altogether and all of the information staggered into Chapter One at appropriate times and places.<br /><br />There is a reason it is called a WIP.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14932408372240147454noreply@blogger.com