tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post8872590240583997932..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Tale of Two QueriesHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-18249896766691144542014-05-08T09:40:42.735-05:002014-05-08T09:40:42.735-05:00Thanks Misha for helping me combine the two querie...Thanks Misha for helping me combine the two queries! I like the way you ended it: "now she'll have to decide if that's worth giving him another chance."<br /><br />Marcy, I love how you took it one step further! I absolutely love the line: "During the search, Giselle sees beyond the man he was; she sees who is now." I think I'll keep that one! <br /><br />Kristin Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15119967346326579747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-76390238461966927302014-05-07T16:57:52.007-05:002014-05-07T16:57:52.007-05:00I like the cleaned up version.I like the cleaned up version.Traci Kenworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07336373871521363649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-67156165723674488092014-05-07T02:17:03.172-05:002014-05-07T02:17:03.172-05:00I agree with you about "deep goodness". ...I agree with you about "deep goodness". Was a bit bleh and I hoped someone could come up with something better. <br /><br />So thanks! ;-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-75050460993231730392014-05-06T14:17:14.215-05:002014-05-06T14:17:14.215-05:00Okay, so I really like how Misha worked this but I...Okay, so I really like how Misha worked this but I'll take it a step further:<br /><br /><br /><br />But when Giselle discovers the truth about Declan’s shadowy past, the perfect image she had crumbles, along with her chance for second love. Yet when one of her children vanishes, it's Declan who steps up to help her find him. During the search, Giselle sees beyond the man he was; she sees who he is now. Now she has to decide if that’s worth giving him another chance. <br /><br /><br />"deep goodness" seemed a little bland to me. Anyway. Just my take.<br /><br />Nice query Ms. A. Nonymous :)mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.com