tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post7469380025123001329..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: CadenceHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-67623325697935561102012-04-17T20:20:21.348-05:002012-04-17T20:20:21.348-05:00Excellent post. I can sometimes manage this in sho...Excellent post. I can sometimes manage this in shorter pieces but I find it hard to sustain a lyrical style. Practice, I suppose.mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-71037021884281508242012-04-16T23:00:28.968-05:002012-04-16T23:00:28.968-05:00Catching and making those small rhythm changes wil...Catching and making those small rhythm changes will make big differences in your work.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-28221045627351357542012-04-16T17:32:18.490-05:002012-04-16T17:32:18.490-05:00I totally agree with you that great prose has to h...I totally agree with you that great prose has to have rhythm to it. You did a great post.<br /><br />www.modernworld4.blogspot.comGina Gaohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09032273127593718883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-29621159750784068942012-04-16T07:41:54.043-05:002012-04-16T07:41:54.043-05:00Very interesting post - I'm not naturally a po...Very interesting post - I'm not naturally a poet, so that would be something I really would have to work on. I wouldn't have necessarily picked up the rhythm in those novel extracts! I'll look out for it now, but I have a feeling it's something that can't be forced too much.Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.com