tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post5214746226417081796..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Dialogue Crit #3Huntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-79183466094760770812012-06-02T01:07:26.661-05:002012-06-02T01:07:26.661-05:00Thanks for the crit L. As a stand-alone scene, it...Thanks for the crit L. As a stand-alone scene, it does leave a lot of vague references. It is possible that the preceeding scenes were not clear enough either.<br /><br />I appreciate the time you took to offer feedback.<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.com