tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post3721701969974191032..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Birth of a TaglineHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-74066266210283001062013-07-06T15:18:14.378-05:002013-07-06T15:18:14.378-05:00I have to go with a no vote to the second "hi...I have to go with a no vote to the second "his."Terri K Rowehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13907444470407490254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-83567374974964258482013-06-30T15:31:43.138-05:002013-06-30T15:31:43.138-05:00I'm going to disagree, no second 'his.'...I'm going to disagree, no second 'his.' I like it just the way it is - a lot!mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-86523785901241619092013-06-29T13:21:27.538-05:002013-06-29T13:21:27.538-05:00Nice tag. I'm wondering how this sounds to you...Nice tag. I'm wondering how this sounds to you: Magic. It's in his blood, but out of his control.<br /><br />I kind of think the two ideas are in contrast, but since I don't know your plot I'm not sure.<br /><br />Good luck with this. It's not easy, is it?cleemckenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456109243453726483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-89488313721437781392013-06-28T19:22:25.497-05:002013-06-28T19:22:25.497-05:00Seems like I'm in the minority again as I pref...Seems like I'm in the minority again as I prefer it without the second 'his'.<br /><br />For some reason, even with knowing the context is likely to be <i>his</i> control we're talking about, having it 'out of control' just feels wilder to me than having it 'out of his control'.<br /><br />Hmm ... does that even make sense?Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-73681210672137229122013-06-28T15:16:01.111-05:002013-06-28T15:16:01.111-05:00Oooh, I like it. And yes, a second "his"...Oooh, I like it. And yes, a second "his" might make things a bit more clear.Liz A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16531953467834426316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-69783298285141115362013-06-28T11:58:16.947-05:002013-06-28T11:58:16.947-05:00I like the second "his" too.I like the second "his" too.Lizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16170701034715108039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-3728077361686691572013-06-28T10:40:51.728-05:002013-06-28T10:40:51.728-05:00I think it sounds better with the second "his...I think it sounds better with the second "his." But that might be because I'm reading it in the morning ;)<br /><br />I'm glad you can check this off your list.Patchihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09097638657085263738noreply@blogger.com