tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post3410628727878536192..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Sin and Syntax - how to craft wickedly effective proseHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-36046126729828661892016-03-10T21:04:44.871-06:002016-03-10T21:04:44.871-06:00I don't tend to be wordy in description, so I ...I don't tend to be wordy in description, so I don't worry too much about adjectives. At the moment, at least. Liz A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16531953467834426316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-90273736534757216992016-03-10T06:47:59.614-06:002016-03-10T06:47:59.614-06:00Interesting topic. I'm aware when I use adjec...Interesting topic. I'm aware when I use adjectives. I don't stress in a first or second draft, but later go back and find better descriptions. Sometimes though, if a quick adjective works rather than slowing the pace of some copy I leave it alone. And with dialog, if my characters use adjectives - because most people do in casual conversations - I leave them alone. <br />Karen Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01522178275164058849noreply@blogger.com