tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post1606428821904633587..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Hooks and PayoffsHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-14267911196380052542011-07-05T20:29:45.398-05:002011-07-05T20:29:45.398-05:00I read K. M. Weiland's post. It was right on.I read K. M. Weiland's post. It was right on.mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-1743390313539044302011-07-05T13:22:20.570-05:002011-07-05T13:22:20.570-05:00Fantastic advice and much for me to think about!
...Fantastic advice and much for me to think about!<br /><br /><a href="http://www.elliegarratt.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Ellie Garratt</a>Ellie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-78944706866642383112011-07-05T09:58:08.834-05:002011-07-05T09:58:08.834-05:00I wrote a manuscript around my first sentence.
The...I wrote a manuscript around my first sentence.<br />Then re-wrote the first sentence.<br /><br />Queries and first lines are the hardest to fine-tune. Give me a 100K manuscript to do instead.Huntresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.com