tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post1550646961491208585..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Poetry Submission #2Huntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-32954285309889612942013-01-02T09:16:23.622-06:002013-01-02T09:16:23.622-06:00:):)Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04137538450232783883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-78307625101776148622013-01-02T09:16:00.760-06:002013-01-02T09:16:00.760-06:00Makes sense. For some reason I hadn't caught ...Makes sense. For some reason I hadn't caught that (I changed the line to avoid another repeated word)Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04137538450232783883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-38971047368160950722012-12-29T10:48:54.686-06:002012-12-29T10:48:54.686-06:00I like the poem, I'd change the repeating rhym...I like the poem, I'd change the repeating rhymes "place" in the first stanza. DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-34172542478229518432012-12-29T10:03:39.944-06:002012-12-29T10:03:39.944-06:00Makes me think of someone tripping, where the line...Makes me think of someone tripping, where the lines between real and unreal are blurred.mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-11283606430127858632012-12-28T10:10:01.844-06:002012-12-28T10:10:01.844-06:00It doesn't have any meaning except what you gi...It doesn't have any meaning except what you give it. I just like the rhythm and the imagery. "Vague and slightly creepy." Like the old Fantasia, where the music creates the images.<br /><br />LaurenLaurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04137538450232783883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-8727555246333452792012-12-28T08:32:02.444-06:002012-12-28T08:32:02.444-06:00I like that second stanza very much. Interesting ...I like that second stanza very much. Interesting exercise!Bossy Bettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12568355839499622409noreply@blogger.com