tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post1196617792454177073..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Why is Reading and Writing So Subjective?Huntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-5987338681247110602013-04-24T00:47:32.208-05:002013-04-24T00:47:32.208-05:00The first, definitely the first.The first, definitely the first.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-71859385312325449492013-04-23T16:40:22.006-05:002013-04-23T16:40:22.006-05:00:) That's the other reason I included it. This...:) That's the other reason I included it. This is toward the beginning of the story and I wanted people to get a glimpse into why Talia is the way she is. Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-9771429831599926042013-04-23T16:38:56.383-05:002013-04-23T16:38:56.383-05:00That's exactly why I wrote it that way. I want...That's exactly why I wrote it that way. I wanted her response to make sense. Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-83247268984266949832013-04-23T16:35:32.980-05:002013-04-23T16:35:32.980-05:00Interesting that POV makes a difference for you. I...Interesting that POV makes a difference for you. I think it's easier to be sparse and fast-paced in 1st because we're already inside someone's head. With 3rd we're a bit removed and there is a need for just a bit more to help the reader relate to the character. Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-88016380680619891132013-04-23T15:54:02.895-05:002013-04-23T15:54:02.895-05:00I prefer the first because it tells me about Talia...I prefer the first because it tells me about Talia = character development.mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-16551096615548008522013-04-23T15:25:26.646-05:002013-04-23T15:25:26.646-05:00The first, just because it tells me why she's ...The first, just because it tells me why she's saying no. Of course, if that info was already in the story earlier, then the second would work. (I would write it the second way, myself, but I really need to work on adding detail to things. It's a failing.)Liz A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16531953467834426316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-84425020513260374512013-04-23T13:09:45.124-05:002013-04-23T13:09:45.124-05:00For me, it actually depends on what POV I'm wr...For me, it actually depends on what POV I'm writing. In third, I prefer a few more background tidbits. For first, I like to keep my writing sparse and fast-paced.Joan Hehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14241547000296152599noreply@blogger.com