tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post1167134005448720398..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Drabble #1 First, the TreasureHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-25399105770121879212014-03-13T10:05:18.816-05:002014-03-13T10:05:18.816-05:00Love this! Especially the line "He clutched h...Love this! Especially the line "He clutched his map as he was buried, the X his downfall, inches above wealth, an inch from death." Great job!!Kristin Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15119967346326579747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-54335825310712076142014-03-12T15:03:29.813-05:002014-03-12T15:03:29.813-05:00Great last line :)Great last line :)mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-4833605689705606552014-03-12T11:03:33.029-05:002014-03-12T11:03:33.029-05:00I liked this one too! Clever and fun! Nicely done!...I liked this one too! Clever and fun! Nicely done!Hillaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15591513415890340045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-9699086508610202702014-03-11T22:12:56.733-05:002014-03-11T22:12:56.733-05:00I liked the flow of action. And the last line made...I liked the flow of action. And the last line made me smile, it was very clever!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-42667238803374975492014-03-11T20:00:10.994-05:002014-03-11T20:00:10.994-05:00No worries Kristina. I fixed it for you. No worries Kristina. I fixed it for you. Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-72050334832948414522014-03-11T17:27:26.863-05:002014-03-11T17:27:26.863-05:00Made me laughMade me laughHuntresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-67177359661735393522014-03-11T15:54:14.377-05:002014-03-11T15:54:14.377-05:00Thank you! :D And I just noticed that the second &...Thank you! :D And I just noticed that the second "of" in the first paragraph should have been "and." Are little grammar corrections allowed once the contest starts? :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09631350545600952074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-47364088671008548792014-03-11T15:09:53.078-05:002014-03-11T15:09:53.078-05:00Ha! How many times do we chase our dreams in the w...Ha! How many times do we chase our dreams in the wrong order? Nicely done.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.com