tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post8776864023634670055..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: #2 Taglines/BlurbsHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-24162696416425695912013-06-26T12:02:17.127-05:002013-06-26T12:02:17.127-05:00Every time I try to shorten the query into a blurb...Every time I try to shorten the query into a blurb it feels like it's missing something. Arg!<br /><br />Do blurbs need to be less than 100 words or 150?<br /><br />How about:<br /><br />When David notices the tiny tattoo hidden beneath his girlfriend's hair, he realizes Catrine is next in line for a hereditary throne that should not exist on their planet. David is appalled that a single family has been ruling Demia in secret since colonization. Their society values merit, not birthright. At least that was what they taught him in school. Then David uncovers his parents' ploy to crown him the first king of Demia by marrying him to Catrine. Loving her will bind him to a deceitful government David is unsure he can change from within. His leadership skills might be better employed bringing peace to the turmoil at the other end of the galaxy. But cannot Demia prosper without him. And he cannot evade those determined to lure him home. Catrine might just be the bait he cannot resist.<br /><br />Is this too long?Patchihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09097638657085263738noreply@blogger.com