tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post8143055541738588102..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: #2 The RapierHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-35260349579591798852011-06-22T07:58:56.689-05:002011-06-22T07:58:56.689-05:00I like this, but if this is the beginning be caref...I like this, but if this is the beginning be careful about starting with dreams. Not that I haven't ever done it myself but I hear editors don't care for it. <br /><br />I liked how the author set up questions, about the skull, about what is real and what is dream, about being hunted...the last bit about Eva almost felt like an intrusion. I wanted to know more about the other stuff: "The hands holding the weapons know the caress of the iron." That stuff.mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.com