tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post5600648793142986970..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: #2 The Legacy of the EyeHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-49187832141210262902012-11-02T21:20:29.347-05:002012-11-02T21:20:29.347-05:00Huntress makes some excellent suggestions and I ag...Huntress makes some excellent suggestions and I agree with her first statement: the more glimpses I get of this manuscript the more interesting it becomes :)mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-44704116653142692862012-11-02T16:11:08.865-05:002012-11-02T16:11:08.865-05:00Yeah, I would read more. Interesting piece. I like...Yeah, I would read more. Interesting piece. I liked the changes and do agree about the white spaces, but the feeling in this bit of dialogue is pretty strong. I like it.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-61953738030597495622012-11-02T06:52:59.944-05:002012-11-02T06:52:59.944-05:00Thanks Huntress! This is one of my favorite scenes...Thanks Huntress! This is one of my favorite scenes, but I thought I was biased. Thanks for the suggestions :)Patchihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09097638657085263738noreply@blogger.com