tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post1027662287790975063..comments2023-08-01T05:26:06.539-05:00Comments on Unicorn Bell: Senses #2Huntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-52264854461497699922011-10-13T15:47:06.822-05:002011-10-13T15:47:06.822-05:00I had a lot of fun with this. Thanks Charity for t...I had a lot of fun with this. Thanks Charity for this great experiment in seeing, hearing, tasting and feeling as we write.Huntresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4393512822627120580.post-44989780032503489172011-10-13T09:40:26.874-05:002011-10-13T09:40:26.874-05:00I love the image of the snake taking its time to g...I love the image of the snake taking its time to get to the MC, and I felt the sudden pain that came with the motion.<br /><br />Bones grating...wonderful. <br /><br />I could see (love the dust hanging in the air), hear the scream of agony, taste the grit (which also triggers a feel response from me).<br /><br />For feeling, I think the "explosion" and "bones grating" will evoke a sensation in most people.<br /><br />Nicely done.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.com