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Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Queries That Worked- Wilder Mage

The earthquake wasn’t his fault. Not this time.
I wrote those words three years ago as the beginning paragraph to Wilder Mage. Then I deleted them, added them back, changed them, deleted, added...ah well. If you are a writer, you know what I'm talking about.
"I spent the morning putting in a comma and the afternoon removing it.” - Gustave Flaubert
I received four "full" requests in three days for the following query for Wilder Mage, book one of The Magic Withheld. With the release of Wilder Mage in August, Musa Publishing, my fab editor Angela Kelly, and I formed a partnership that I hope will last for many years. 
Justus Aubre figures Iowa is safe for wizards like him. He can lay low and hide in plain sight answering to no one when he uses magic. Especially the guild of wizards. They would nail his hide to the wall and strip him of his freedom. If only they knew where he was.  
Then Sable, a female mage on the run, enters his bar looking for a job and a place to hide. Justus hires her but sets the rules immediately. No romantic entanglements. Sable agrees. All she wants is anonymity. But the two rules are quickly broken and the Guild learns of their location. Justus and Sable have massive talent. They could team up and fight the Guild together to remain free but Sable has a secret. She is an unwilling servant to the Guild. If her emotions are triggered the Guild will own her soul and then use her magical talent to capture the Wilders. 
For them to succeed, Justus must accept the magic and the power he does not want. Or decide if loving Sable is enough reason to become the Guild’s newest acolyte.

 The One and Only Huntress

3 comments:

mshatch said...

Love this book :)

Laura Stephenson said...

Congratulations! That sounds really cool.

Mark Koopmans said...

That is a great query and I'm soooo happy that your book has seen the light of day :)