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Sunday, April 28, 2013

Your first chapter here

Yep, you heard me right. You could see your first chapter here at UB, critted by moi and everyone else who pops in this week. All you have to do is send it to me at unicornbellsubmissions@gmail.com. I will take the first first chapter I get and over the course of the week I will critique it for character, pacing, grammar, and flow - among other things. Hopefully our followers will chime in with their opinions as well which will give one lucky person a lot of feedback on that all-important first chapter. Because if an agent doesn't like your first chapter, she probably isn't going read any further.

Interested?

3 comments:

Aldrea Alien said...

Tempting ...

Jen Minkman said...

Very tempting! I just submitted :)

Glynis Rankin said...

sounds interesting, I'm tempted.