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Wednesday, January 30, 2013

Hook #9

I hadn't enjoyed a hangover since my University days with Vicki and Grey, and this one wasn't any different.

2 comments:

mshatch said...

This one doesn't tell me much either plus people with hangovers don't interest me unless I know why they have a hangover.

Huntress said...

This implies the MC 'enjoyed' hangovers before. Double negative? Snarky? tongue in cheek?