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Wednesday, January 30, 2013

Hook #7

Before the car pulled into the driveway I knew whoever was inside had a hold on me.
“Is that a new one?” Greg slid off the trunk of my car and started stretching for our run.
“Guess so.” I shrugged. 
The car pulled along the sidewalk and the man driving got out.

3 comments:

Patchi said...

I keep coming back to this one. I think what's bothering me is Greg's question.

mshatch said...

This doesn't quite tell/show me enough.

Huntress said...

I'd read more. Call my slightly hooked.