I'll be back. And I'm going to invite you to send something in for critting. Yup, L's going to crit. It's been a long time.
To be different from other critting weeks, I'm going to ask you to go long -- send me a whole scene, beginning to end. Let's put the cap somewhere around 1k -1.5k so we can really see what's going on.
Would you like a macro-level crit of character, motivations, world-building? Shall I get out the red pen and murder your sentences individually? I could do both, even. I am at your disposal.
If you want to get a jump on this, send your scene to email@example.com and title it "For L."