Title: Finding Me
Genre: Women's Fiction
Emotion: depression, sadness
Sinking. The ache inside crushed me as I lay in our bed, staring at the ceiling. Every inch of me cried out to him, but he sat on the other side of the room at his desk.
Turning my back to him, I curled into a ball, hiding the tears that flowed freely down my cheeks. I struggled to control my breathing. In spite of it all, I didn’t want to hurt him.
The room filled with silence. Each breath followed more quickly than the first, despite my efforts to stay in control. I heard him shuffling papers behind me. How could he move on so quickly? (I wonder what he moved on from) Another twist of my heart. If only he would hold me, perhaps I could tell him the truth.
He returned and the bed dipped as he lay down behind me. His arm rested against mine. That simple touch warmed me with hope.
“I’ll try not to be so condescending. I know the house is not going to be perfect…”
I tuned him out as the pain resurged. “This isn’t about cleaning the house. Not for me.” Barely a whisper, but he heard me.
“Tell me what it’s about.” His fingers traced patterns on my bare arm. How could he not know how I longed for that very touch throughout the day?
“I don’t want to.” I shuddered thinking how close I was to being cruel to him.
“Is it because you don’t feel like I respect you?”
So close. A spark of hope sputtered to life. Maybe he could see me. My doubt was too strong. Why did he ask that? He didn’t respect me. My heart shattered under the prolonged pressure.
“It’s just that--” How could I do this to him?
“What?” His voice felt soft and warm in my ear.
He was a good man. But he used his love up on everyone else. There was nothing left for me.
“I don’t feel loved.” Another shudder shook my body. “Not by the kids--” I paused, knowing I could never say the rest. Not by you.
His fingers stilled. The silence grew so heavy I felt it pounding in my ears. What was he thinking? What would he say?
I would never know.
The kids started yelling in the other room. I sighed as he left
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